Wednesday 4 January 2012

. CONTRAST ESSAY .

    . GAY MARRIAGE IN NEW YORK .




   Previously, gay marriage was not allowed in New York. It got a lot of resistance from every side.  It was consisted on a few factors such as gay marriage will change the foundation of society. It will also encourage more gay couple to get marry. Gay marriage also against the religion and no religion in this world allows the homosexuality Gay marriage occurs when people get relationship problem and starts to hate different gender.  They feel that the same gender were more in their shoes. There are many reasons why gay marriage was allowed in New York , such as  gay’s advocate got the highest vote from the citizen, majority of them are homosexual and lesslegal relationship as well as government got strong protest from gay’s communities.

 * On 2 January 2012 , my group got very bad responded from Miss Zu after we presented the essay . We were very sad and Miss Zu asked us to change it . Then , we changed our essay into the new one . After that , we got a possitive responded from Miss Zu , but we also got the wrong things such as the grammar . But , we were very satisfied on our essay :)) Thanks Miss Zu because always shows us the truth path .

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